For this week’s Before & After I thought I’d try some suggestions from Monday’s Critique This! post and apply them to the photo and see what we end up with. I think it’s better!…
Shot with a Canon Rebel XTi, EF 28-135 at 41mm, f/8, 1/400, 100 ISO
Edited with Photoshop CS5
Before After

I had sharpened with the Highpass Filter in the original, so I bumped it up
by duplicating the layer, then reducing the opacity to 49%.
To add more contrast I changed the Black & White adjustment layer
from Default to the Darker preset.
Then I upped the contrast more by deepening the
Midtones Levels adjustment from 1.68 to 1.24.
And I made no changes to the following:
Hue/Saturation adjustment to colorize with yellow.
Kim Klassen Golden texture on Multiply at 64%,
and her Vintage texture on Overlay at 58%.
Thanks to Tiffany, Winn, Prem, Kimberly, and Angela for the help! The edit definitely has more of the moody feel I was going for. I didn’t try blurring the background because there’s way too much try to mask. I do still feel like the sky is too bright, but I suppose that’s to be expected shooting on a bright sunshiny day.
Bright sunshiny day? Now I have a combination of the Brady Bunch and Johnny Nash stuck in my head.
I just realized I forgot to link up over at PP…oops!!
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